Day 1: A Christmas Poem
Evie has used Word to produce a Christmas Poem in Hornbeam whilst using metaphors, similes and alliteration.
Challenge:
Can you find metaphors, similes or alliterative phrases in this poem? Can you think of some of your own? Perhaps you might like to write your own Christmas poem? Post your ideas here
Comments
Denise Monk
Sun, 01/12/2013 - 08:14
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Great Poem Evie, enjoyed very
Great Poem Evie, enjoyed very much.
Anne Hayes
Sun, 01/12/2013 - 09:21
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Great poem, Evie! Best wishes
Great poem, Evie! Best wishes to you and all in Hornbeam!
Mrs LeCount
Sun, 01/12/2013 - 09:26
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What a lovely poem by Evie on
What a lovely poem by Evie on the first day of the Advent Calendar! Look forward to seeing more work from Ivy Chimneys throughout the month!
Julie Sillitoe
Sun, 01/12/2013 - 11:55
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Such a fantastic poem, we are
Such a fantastic poem, we are so proud of you. Keep up the good work! Love Mummy and Daddy x
Pete Bradshaw
Sun, 01/12/2013 - 12:12
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Thanks Evie, lovely. Here is
Thanks Evie, lovely. Here is my poem for Advent Sunday..
Advent is here
A time for watching, wondering, waiting, wishing
December's dark cloak falls over the land
Christmas light a mere single star in the inky night.
Lily A
Sun, 01/12/2013 - 13:19
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I enjoyed the poem. Good work
I enjoyed the poem. Good work Evie.
Mrs Webb
Sun, 01/12/2013 - 17:45
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A great poem to kick-start us
A great poem to kick-start us into the festive season..............
Anonymous
Sun, 01/12/2013 - 19:48
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Brilliant Evie. Very well
Brilliant Evie. Very well written.
Aimee Pomeroy
Sun, 01/12/2013 - 19:53
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Well done Evie! What a
Well done Evie! What a fantastic poem! You should be very proud xx
Kathy Moffat
Sun, 01/12/2013 - 20:59
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We have a relative with us
We have a relative with us from Melbourne and she knows the school you are doing the advent calendar with small world
sarah-louise je...
Sun, 01/12/2013 - 21:30
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Evie
Evie
A fantastic poem
Sarah-Louise
Ali Hughes
Sun, 01/12/2013 - 22:17
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Well done Evie-reading this
Well done Evie-reading this from New Zealand and very impressed with the calendar. It is already the 2nd December here but not in the UK so I cannot open that one yet!
Sharon Catlin
Sun, 01/12/2013 - 22:24
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We'll done Evie. What a great
We'll done Evie. What a great poem.
P1A
Mon, 02/12/2013 - 04:08
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Well done Evie. What a
Well done Evie. What a wonderful poem
From
P1a
Tommy and RYE
Mon, 02/12/2013 - 11:28
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well done Evie from TOMMY AND
well done Evie from TOMMY AND RYE
Tommy and RYE
Mon, 02/12/2013 - 11:29
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well done Evie from TOMMY AND
well done Evie from TOMMY AND RYE
Ana Atkinson
Mon, 02/12/2013 - 15:06
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What a lovely poem. Great
What a lovely poem. Great work Evie! Xxx
Scott Jackson
Mon, 02/12/2013 - 16:39
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A great poem Evie! Well done
A great poem Evie! Well done!
Cathy Freeman
Mon, 02/12/2013 - 16:51
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Wow Evie, what a fantastic
Wow Evie, what a fantastic poem. Well done. :-)
WAdams
Mon, 02/12/2013 - 23:35
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Evie, a very impressive piece
Evie, a very impressive piece of work, well done.
lola h
Tue, 03/12/2013 - 08:20
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Great poem Evie loved it!
Great poem Evie loved it!
Ana Atkinson
Tue, 03/12/2013 - 14:48
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What a lovely poem Evie. Well
What a lovely poem Evie. Well done! Xx
Annie in plane
Fri, 06/12/2013 - 11:13
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Hi, Evie i love your poem it
Hi, Evie i love your poem it's great
Nanny & Grandpa...
Sat, 07/12/2013 - 14:25
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We are so proud of you Evie -
We are so proud of you Evie - Well done
alai P1A
Sun, 08/12/2013 - 23:50
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I like your calendar. and i
I like your calendar. and i like to be a teacher like your teacher and my teacher is Ms Leahy.
Olivia
Tue, 10/12/2013 - 10:23
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Hi!,
Hi!,
Evie your amazing poem was just for ...CHRISTMAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
olivia x
P.S I'm from Plane Class!!!!!!!!!!|
Erin G
Mon, 16/12/2013 - 10:08
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Great poem Evie i'm
Great poem Evie i'm speechless!
Emma B
Mon, 16/12/2013 - 10:09
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Well Done Evie very good peom
Well Done Evie very good peom just to say losts of chistmas words and very good ryming words .
Elena M
Mon, 16/12/2013 - 10:14
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Really really great. Good
Really really great. Good alliteration,I can't belive you did that.Brilliant!!
Elia L
Mon, 16/12/2013 - 10:15
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Well done! I really enjoyed
Well done! I really enjoyed your fantastic poem! You added some great metaphors and similes!
From Elia
Kitty S
Mon, 16/12/2013 - 16:18
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well done Evie you used a lot
well done Evie you used a lot of adjectives!
Grandma and Grandad
Sat, 28/12/2013 - 17:35
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Wonderful poem Evie. We have
Wonderful poem Evie. We have printed it and laminated it. It is on show with our Christmas cards and has had many good comments from our friends. Well done.
Maly
Sun, 29/12/2013 - 04:40
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Urrrr heh good poem!!
Urrrr heh good poem!!